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Post by Glass_Tearsx on Dec 6, 2005 4:58:14 GMT 7
i wrote this song along time ago and i think its suck majorly....but what do you think?
Only Sometimes
Only sometimes we are together Only sometimes I love to see you smile Sometimes you only want a little bit Sometimes I want the whole world to know But, only do you really love me….
Sometimes I can see you in my mind I try to hold on to you My heart feels so broken Now that your gone I don’t feel so strong Cuz Sometimes all I want to be…. Is with you Sometimes…Sometimes
Only did you think of me as someone very special Only did you want me to know that I’ll never be alone
(chorus)
Sometimes you wanna hold my hand Sometimes I’d like to understand Why you left me Why you can’t see That the only one I love is the one that stands before me before me…before me…before me…
Like stars tears fall down from my eyes Like rain I start to cry Now you feel this way Now you want me to stay…
Sometimes I can see you in my mind I try to hold on to you My heart feels so broken Now that your gone I don’t feel so strong Cuz Sometimes all I want to be…. Is with you Sometimes…Sometimes
Like stars tears fall down my eyes(Now you feel this way) Like rain I start to cry(Now you want me to stay)
Want me to stay…Want me to stay…Want me to stay…
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Post by Nessa on Dec 6, 2005 14:51:21 GMT 7
yup this is the best *nods*
think its awesome u should keep on writing more songs melody seriously.. these songs r fantastic
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Post by Dangerous To Know on Dec 7, 2005 1:27:23 GMT 7
Great song
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Post by Glass_Tearsx on Dec 7, 2005 7:15:04 GMT 7
i didn't know you felt so highly of it Passion Flower.
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